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i love this!

very lovely to listen to. whenever i listen to it, it makes me all giddy and happy. kinda cheesy but true. =x soothing and incredibly well put-together. everything just seemed so RIGHT. i hope you find that right person to sing this because that would top this amazing song off <3

Phyrnna responds:

Thank you~! I personally find so much wrong with this... since I made this a while ago when my skills in music production were still shoddy. I'll definitely be making a better version of this.

And I do hope that I can find someone. I'm in no rush... yet I haven't found someone yet. :P We'll see.

sweet guitar

percussion was pretty off. at first i thought it was you bumping around on the mic. should probably fix that dude.

also, the percussion becomes really tinny and fading sounding at around the 1 minute mark.

really digging the guitar though =) when the two guitars come in, it starts getting a bit messy. i think that's volume issues with both guitars though, because one will be turned up when it's not really playing anything like at 3:08.

3:24-3:30 also sounds really messy.

throughout the song, some random breaks in the music, which kind of slowed down the song.

love the solo =) just need to put it in the forefront, and not behind random bass notes =P

sorry for writing so much. you have talent, just need to clean it up a bit so that the best parts are showing at the best times. good luck =)

ChocloMan responds:

Thanks for the review. It's actually piano and guitar at first :P

You bring up important points, I'll keep them in mind for next time, but this was really something I did in about an hour or less for school :P

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