snowfender's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[An Unfortunate Girl:Lapse]

pretty good!

i like this animation a lot. it's eerie, but not in an OMG i'm going to bomb you with gross images of dead and bloody people.

animations, i think was good. i liked the beginning a lot. it really set the mood and captured my attention from the start! i like the unique twist you had with it. the animations were dark and eerie enough for the setting you were looking for.

voice acting was pretty good by usako. she didn't get to say too much yet but nothing to really complain about. aw you tweaked my voice higher =x i could have redone it and tried to make my voice higher if you wanted like that. for the male voices, i like the voice for the teenager but i think the masked guy could have been a bit more cynical and evil sounding.

overall, nice job! thanks for letting me be a part of it!

TheFabs responds:

Thankyou! And, yeah, I was completely happy with your original voice, but when Usako sent me her VA, it sounded kind of similar to yours, so I decided to barely raise the pitch of your voice to make the two voices differ. Thankyou so much though!

[Gaming days short 3-F]

not bad =)

i liked the script this time around and the animations were pretty good, but the audio wasn't the best. you could barely hear kyle a lot of the times, so if you could possibly make his lines louder while keeping the rest of the people the same, then i think it would have turned out better. otherwise, i think you did a pretty good job with it all! those voice actors did pretty damn awesome ;)

Yoshiking2 responds:

you did to snowfender ^^ but yea you're right i'll get him to be louder next time. i hope to have a script ready when i get back.

[Gaming days Short 1]

cool!

i really liked this! i liked the simplicity of the plot and music and graphics, even though it still looked very cleanly put together. great job with this, and thank you for letting me be a part of this! =)

Yoshiking2 responds:

I think it was because you was willing to voice act and i was inspired to actually do flash again and as promised I added you to the List of credits. You have offically been given credit for voice ^^.